Of Thoughts and Swords

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Haiku 04.11.13.

緑中(みどりなか)

(あめ)(き)いろは

(しろ)(えだ)

In the rain, amongst the green, yellow leaves and white branches.

Inmitten des Grüns, liegen im Regen, gelbe Blätter und weiße Äste.

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I am not sure if I should consider this one finished, but as I brought it up here I guess it has to stay that way. I hope someone likes it.

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2 comments on “Haiku 04.11.13.

  1. taehreh
    November 8, 2013

    Love it! And you included the hiragana (thank you!) so I could read the Japanese version. 🙂

    • asreon
      November 10, 2013

      Thanks for the praise. Kana are a must, as you need them to convey your references from time to time. As said not one of my best, the placement of the rain is not entirely to my liking. Guess that is what experience/training is for:)

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